Wednesday, November 25, 2020

Six Sentence Stories - Oasis

Sometimes on holidays a home is filled with lots of family and friends gathering to share a meal, talk, and play games and it may be hard to find a quiet spot to land, or an oasis of calm, at least while everyone is still there. Celebrating together is a much looked forward event, but this year, with COVID-19 concerns, for many people the celebrating with others is highly limited in some areas in an attempt to curb the spread of the virus. In other words, unless one's home consists of a house full of kids, the oasis of calm will just continue as is while COVID-19 rages on outside the safety of ones home.

I am linking this blog hop post to Six Sentence Stories - Oasis hosted by Denise of Girlie on the Edge's Blog.

Resting her mind from the cares of the world which were weighing her down seemed so impossible, yet she knew it was necessary and so she trudged further up the trail trying to ignore the pain in her calves and thighs and the weight of the pack on her back.


She had taken the necessary precautions and let Dave know where she was headed that morning, saying only that she needed some R & R or she wouldn’t be any good for anyone.


He looked long and hard at her, trying to read between the lines the emotions he felt emanating from her body, but decided not to say anything and just nodded before she turned and headed out the door, leaving only the scent of her sunscreen.


To reach their personal oasis required more energy than she had remembered when they both had hiked the trail that first time before diverting off the path to a secluded small pool at the base of a cascading waterfall.


She remembered how they had sat on a log beside the pool, and he had listened to her and didn’t say a word; he just listened until she laid bare her troubled heart.


As she stopped to drink from her thermos, she heard quick steps around the bend of the trail behind her and Dave’s voice saying, “Wait, you can’t go there without me.”


14 comments:

  1. Beautiful Six! Happy Thanksgiving.

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    1. Thank you. Hope you have had a happy Thanksgiving too.

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  2. An excellent and brooding six, Pat. And what a sweet ending that they went to their special place together.

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  3. You brought me to tears, Pat! What a poignant Six. Beautiful.

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    1. Thank you. Sorry about the tears, but there are times one just can't hold them back.

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  4. I'll reinforce the previous comments... a quietly powerful Six. Engaging (with a touch of suspense/growing tension) and a resolution that adds rather than subtracts.
    Excellent Six

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  5. Well, it took me forever and at least a day, but I finally found you, Pat! My apologies for the delay, but maybe I get 2 points for perseverance? :) This is lovely--both your blog, and your 6SS. I especially loved the ending, oooh, I want more! "Bedelia's alter ego" <3

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    1. I'm glad you persevered. I need to go do the same and read the rest of the SSS that have posted.

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  6. This is just beautiful! She may have thought she needed to get away, but she really needed to get away with HIM.
    Not going to lie, though, a part of me wondered if you were going to do a Dyanne and kill her on that mountain!

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    1. Thank you, Dyanne. No, I couldn't go there with that story. That reaches into too dark of a place for me.

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  7. This is the story of true love. Beautiful.

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