Another post being linked to the Six Sentence Stories blog hop hosted by Denise of Girlie On The Edge's Blog
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After she retired she sometimes found herself thinking about certain students, and this day she was wondering what had become of the intelligent, quiet and kind of a loner kid in her classroom who occasionally raised his hand to answer a question, but mostly seemed to be gazing out the window, seemingly unaware of what was being discussed.
Surprisingly, at least to her, he invariably did outstanding on all the tests and assignments, so during his junior year when he began receiving invitations from universities from all over the country to come see what they could offer him, she wondered what the future would hold for him, and encouraged him to schedule an appointment with the career counselor at the school to talk about his strengths and interests, etc.
Although he originally planned to be in her class all year, she had heard through the grapevine he had dropped her class the second semester and registered for what he thought would be a more interesting class.
Between classes toward the end of the year, she saw him surrounded by a group of students, but they quickly dispersed, except for him, when the bell rang signaling classes would be beginning shortly.
As she quickened her steps to return to her classroom, she saw him with his head down walking slowly, almost shuffling as he headed toward the exit to the parking lot, and she made a mental note to herself to have a chat soon with the school counselor.
With the myriad of tasks she needed to take care of before retiring that year, plus attending all the obligatory meetings for the teachers regarding the district’s plans to increase their video instruction in certain courses, she neglected to talk to the counselor about her hunch.
Each week there is a different prompt word to be included in a story written with only six sentences. This week the prompt is video. |
The ending makes me wonder what her hunch was about that student who seemingly disappeared.
ReplyDeleteI wonder about that too.
DeleteThe concern of the retired teacher is captured well.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
DeleteI hope her former student went on to live a happy/contented and successful life. The curiosity must have bothered her for a some time.
ReplyDeleteI hope so, for his sake and hers.
DeleteWe never mean to let people fall through the cracks, but it happens.
ReplyDeleteOne would be sad, if it were intentional.
DeleteIt sounds like a missed opportunity, but maybe he turned out absolutely fine without any intervention. Let's hope so.
ReplyDeleteIt does appear to be the case, or at least she feels it was.
Deletevividly written. good six
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Deletevery nice! engaging with an ending that provides the Reader with the opportunity to ask questions.
ReplyDeleteWatch out! Serial story zone ahead! Proceed at your own risk!
lol I totally enjoy serial stories, especially in this, flash fiction context.
looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks, Clark. At first I was thinking of not leaving this story so open ended, but then I thought, better to let the readers ponder what the future may be.
DeleteI hope he went on to big and bright things. She had a lot to think of with her retirement looming.
ReplyDeleteI hope so. It seems that after she settled into retirement the past came to visit.
DeleteI sense a despondency in the boy, worry in the teacher.
ReplyDeleteDid he drop the class out of boredom, or a desire to remain disconnected and in some way, unseen?
This story could go a number of different ways. There are several possibilities.
DeleteHe might have been using and selling drugs. I hope he managed to find something less destructive to do with his time and talents.
ReplyDeletePerhaps, but I don't know.
DeleteI'm thinking that something troubling was going on beyond the school gates, something he had no wish to share with a teacher.
ReplyDeleteMy Six!
That is certainly a possibility.
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