Wednesday, April 22, 2020

Six Sentence Stories - Bridge

Sometimes I feel like writing gets one from point A to point B in one's life, kind of like a bridge does. I am thankful for blog hops, such as this one hosted by Denise of Girlie on the Edge's Blog. I am linking my post to Six Sentence Stories - Bridge



In the summer it was possible to see the rust-colored bottom of the creek, unless the cows, on their way to being milked, had just plodded through and stirred up the creek bed with their hooves.

She was always on the lookout for the glimmer of an agate which may have traveled downstream during the times when the creek rose and flooded over its banks. 

Much of the stream meandered amongst tree roots which fought to retain their own claim to the soil especially during what was jokingly referred to as the monsoon season. 

Some of the larger roots cradled pools of water and provided a shady refuge for an occasional trout or two during fishing season.

When the water level was low and not so swift, she could feel the coolness of the water as it pressed her knee-high black rubber farm boots against her legs, and she felt completely safe forging the stream, knowing the water wasn’t anywhere near as high as the top of her boots.

It was quite another matter in the winter when she had to walk the plank by crossing the make-do bridge comprised of a single slippery 2” x 8” weathered board resting on the soggy creek banks not much higher than the murky, turbulent, roiling water just to do a single but necessary chore on the other side.

12 comments:

  1. holy smoke! talk about your evocative-to-the-point-of-being tactile Sixes!

    especially the thing about the feel of the... (gotta go with direct quote) "...coolness of the water as it pressed her knee-high black rubber farm boots against her legs,"

    (Wayne and Garth: "We are not worthy, we are not worthy.")

    Very cool

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  2. You put us there with your words Excellent job. Great six.

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  3. You wouldn't catch me going across that plank :)

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    1. It gets scarier the older one gets.I would end up in the water now for sure.

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  4. Wayne, Garth and Clark better make room in the car, lol. How DO you do that? Simple descriptions that totally transport all senses. Most excellent Six.

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    1. Thanks, Denise. Sometimes words keep coming after letting things settle for a while, and other times nothing comes. :-)

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  5. I loved your descriptions! I know exactly what those boots feel like, now that you mention it, and that slipper plank too. Thank you for the field trip, I needed one.

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    1. That boot feel is like no other. :-) Glad you enjoyed the field trip.

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  6. Your description is terrific, Pat. A virtual field trip to a different, maybe better time.

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  7. It's important to know how a challenge feels. Thank you!

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