he needed to work
when it was clear and safe
his real life would start
*
with a real clear voice
sung in a safe range she led
the work of her life
*
with a clear blue sky
the real work began for life
safe among rubble
*
unable to work
real or not it wasn't clear
if her life was safe
*
in the clear moonlight
she felt safe to start her work
scoping some real life
lovely haiku, Pat :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad that you liked them.
DeleteGood. It is tough to use all the words in a haiku.
ReplyDeleteIt is, but I kind of like the challenge of writing haiku using the words given.
DeleteI had difficulty fitting the words into three triolet! Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Jane.
DeleteNice Haiku's. Just followed you through Blogger. Looking forward to reading more of your writing.
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