Thursday, December 12, 2019

Six Sentence Stories - Absent

Do you believe that absence makes the heart grow fonder? With the onset of the holidays many people long for gathering with their families, but for some people it can be a lonely time, especially if they are confined to their home or other place of residence with no resemblance of their home. For those whose abode changes from day to day and who have lost all connections with their family, invitations to spend the holiday in the home of a stranger may be bitter sweet.

Denise of Girlie on the Edge's Blog is the host of the blog hop Six Sentence Stories. I am linking up to Six Sentence Stories - Absent. More details on how to add your story written in six sentences can be found here.


When did the house turn from clamor to sounds of silence, she wondered.

The unexpected booms and crashes along with bursts of giggles and accompanying screams had ruled the roost for what had seemed to have been an inexplicable amount of time, although in reality was quite short. The noises were more likely to have been incited by the humanity within, whereas now the mechanical sounds, which had always been there, had risen to the top of the auditory domain.

When the humming, or droning completely stopped, it was likely to cause the humans to start investigating to see what was wrong, quite similar in nature to how they had reacted to the sudden quieting of the raucousness caused by their youngsters.

Absent are their little children. Present are the memories and pictures in her mind.

11 comments:

  1. They grow up and leave a silence behind. It's bittersweet.

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    1. Learning to appreciate the seasons of one's life is an education in itself and is of value in its own way.

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  2. The grandchildren are arriving soon ☺

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  3. I really like your Six, Pat I've re-read it several times and I can't help but get a sense of "other worldly". Multi-textural, very well written.

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  4. Yes, indeed, those sounds do change. Beautifully depicted in this wonderful six!

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  5. The sounds of silence. Well done, I could hear it all.

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    1. Were you humming a little as you read my Six?

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  6. Sorry to be so late in commenting. my computer, rest its soul, went home to be with the Lord and I was doing everything from the iPhone which would not allow me to comment on your blog and a couple of others. great post, great six.

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