When I first started writing haiku, I generally wrote just a one stanza three line haiku, but I'm finding now that I like to write haiku that is a several stanzas' poem. Such is the case for the haiku I have written for this post and am linking to Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #129 Feel&Space. Feel free to visit Ronovan's site to read other haiku participants have written for this challenge.
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| Night sky photo taken by my husband |
Voluminous Space
dark voluminous
celestial space feels massive
and I a mere speck
standing below gaze
in my space I feel wonder
enveloping me
lighting within me
a spark I feel opens space
to believe I'm His
A nice set:)
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteGreat set of haiku! I haven't written mine yet.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gayl.
DeleteBeautiful poem, Pat. Your husband's picture is also lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
Deletebeautiful poem and beautiful picture!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Becky. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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